Monday 27 March 2017
Contents Page 1st draft... stage 1 and 2 at first I felt as though the contents information was getting lost in the busy background and needed something split them apart. Also, the bottom half of the page looked very dull and empty so therefore, I have decided put another picture of an artist to fill up the page. Once again, I used my front cover image as some sort of colour pallet and took images off there to incorporate in my contents page as this will links between the two.
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ReplyDelete- Use of editing within the background, images and font styles
- Consistent colour scheme and house style
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- You have some empty space on your page Cairo, this can be amended by enlarging the fonts and images so that they are closer together
- Ensure that your contents numbers are not so close together as this would not reflect a realistic magazine. Could you have pgs. 5, 12, 21, 33 etc.? Remember that if you were making a full magazine there would be pages of adverts and other promotions which would take up pages
- Consider how you can amend your image so that it doesn't look so blocked alongside the other: can you fade the edges into each other or create borders around them?
- Correct SPAG mistakes 'Top 10 never heard before Aaliyah songs' 'legends' and correct a few incorrect capital letters
- Ensure that your main feature is also given a pg. number and consider how you can make this look more prominent
- Your use of language at times is very formal, how could you amend this so that it appeals to your target market?
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