Friday 31 March 2017

Contents 1st draft

1 comment:

  1. Make the word 'Features' slightly larger.
    Address your possessive apostrophes.
    The strap line for the exclusive article - the front cover article - needs to be bigger so it is obvious that this is the most important article. You also need a page reference for this article so your readers know where to find it.
    Consider some of your strap lines more carefully - make sure they are grammatically ordered.

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