WWW: - Great use of editing on the main image and fonts - Consistent colour tones that relate to the genre of music - Good use of buzz words such as 'new' and 'exclusive'
EBI: - Consider placing a caption relating to your masthead, a strapline or names of artists featured within the magazine about the masthead. Go back to your research and think about what can be featured here - Remove the quotation marks from around the name of the band and place this above the speech to make it clear that this is their name - Place another strapline under the 'Top 10 legends' as this space looks slightly empty - Amend your strapline on the right to feature another music artist as your main band Danger have already been featured and highlighted, this will show variation
WWW:
ReplyDelete- Great use of editing on the main image and fonts
- Consistent colour tones that relate to the genre of music
- Good use of buzz words such as 'new' and 'exclusive'
EBI:
- Consider placing a caption relating to your masthead, a strapline or names of artists featured within the magazine about the masthead. Go back to your research and think about what can be featured here
- Remove the quotation marks from around the name of the band and place this above the speech to make it clear that this is their name
- Place another strapline under the 'Top 10 legends' as this space looks slightly empty
- Amend your strapline on the right to feature another music artist as your main band Danger have already been featured and highlighted, this will show variation