WWW: - Good use of colour and background image to keep consistent links between all three products - Images have been edited and link to overall theme of the magazine
EBI: - Instead of the name of the artist, you should have a strapline as the main heading of your interview - this should fill the space at the top of the page and should stretch along the width of the page - There is some empty space on the bottom right hand side of the DPS: Consider how this can be filled - you could have a competition of some sort relating to meeting the band? - The lines that you have used within your front cover and contents page underneath different pieces of text to seperate them should be used here also - this would show where each question begins and ends
WWW:
ReplyDelete- Good use of colour and background image to keep consistent links between all three products
- Images have been edited and link to overall theme of the magazine
EBI:
- Instead of the name of the artist, you should have a strapline as the main heading of your interview - this should fill the space at the top of the page and should stretch along the width of the page
- There is some empty space on the bottom right hand side of the DPS: Consider how this can be filled - you could have a competition of some sort relating to meeting the band?
- The lines that you have used within your front cover and contents page underneath different pieces of text to seperate them should be used here also - this would show where each question begins and ends