WWW - Cairo, you do begin to consider the image and the representations evident in some detail. You begin to make some insightful points and show some awareness of language. EBI - You must consider the written text of the DPS - you need to consider what is written, and what kind of representation of the artist is being presented. You need to make links between the ideas in the text and consider how they are also reflected in the image, the colour and the typography. You also need to consider the language, tone and register used in the article. You need to consider the colour in more detail. You state that the Adele article uses black and white to make her seem more masculine but why would they want to do this? Particularly, as the article is about 'women' who rock? You need to proof read your work carefully. The second analysis in particular is littered with errors. You need to ensure you consider GAP in more detail - how do the features persuade and inform, and how do they target the audience and how do they promote the genre of music?
WWW - Cairo, you do begin to consider the image and the representations evident in some detail. You begin to make some insightful points and show some awareness of language.
ReplyDeleteEBI - You must consider the written text of the DPS - you need to consider what is written, and what kind of representation of the artist is being presented. You need to make links between the ideas in the text and consider how they are also reflected in the image, the colour and the typography. You also need to consider the language, tone and register used in the article.
You need to consider the colour in more detail. You state that the Adele article uses black and white to make her seem more masculine but why would they want to do this? Particularly, as the article is about 'women' who rock?
You need to proof read your work carefully. The second analysis in particular is littered with errors.
You need to ensure you consider GAP in more detail - how do the features persuade and inform, and how do they target the audience and how do they promote the genre of music?