WWW - Some nice ideas explored Cairo. You begin to consider how the image and the colour create meaning and represent the artist successfully. EBI - There doesn't seem to be much evidence that you have actually read the articles. You need to read the article because you need to consider if the ideas presented through the image and colour are reinforced and supported in the article. With the Chipmunk article for example you state that he appears to be laid back and chilled out - is this reinforced in the article? If so how? You do comment on the sub-headings but you need to comment on the detail in the article itself. You also need to consider the language use and the register used. With reference to the second analysis, again, there is no evidence of the article here - where is it? Same as above, you need to consider how the ideas being conveyed in the image are supported in the actual text. Try and avoid generic statements about things standing out and being easy to read - they are irrelevant. You must proof read your work. There are a lot of errors.
WWW - Some nice ideas explored Cairo. You begin to consider how the image and the colour create meaning and represent the artist successfully.
ReplyDeleteEBI - There doesn't seem to be much evidence that you have actually read the articles. You need to read the article because you need to consider if the ideas presented through the image and colour are reinforced and supported in the article. With the Chipmunk article for example you state that he appears to be laid back and chilled out - is this reinforced in the article? If so how? You do comment on the sub-headings but you need to comment on the detail in the article itself. You also need to consider the language use and the register used.
With reference to the second analysis, again, there is no evidence of the article here - where is it? Same as above, you need to consider how the ideas being conveyed in the image are supported in the actual text.
Try and avoid generic statements about things standing out and being easy to read - they are irrelevant.
You must proof read your work. There are a lot of errors.
There doesn't seem to be any evidence of you deciding on which genre of magazine you are going to create and why? This needs uploading.
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